WS Comment Fic Fest Anybody?
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It's been terribly slow here, so I thought maybe I could interest some writers/readers out there in a comment fic fest.
Rules/Details:
Post prompts as replies here for stories/fics that could feature watersports. Include any of the following: fandom, pairing, rating, situation. Post as many prompts as you like--with ONE prompt per post. If you see a prompt that inspires you, write for it and post it as a reply to the prompt. You can prompt without writing and write without prompting. You can post as many fills as you like. No pressure, just fun. Make sure anything you prompt/fill adheres to the guidelines of the community (no real person slash, no underage characters, no pimping, no photographs, etc.).
Prompt examples:
*Harry Potter, Draco/Harry, any rating. At the beginning of their relationship Draco uses magic to trick Harry into some pissplay with him. Then he realizes Harry knew about the trick all along and allowed it to happen because he shares the same kink.
*Any characters, any fandom. One character has a condition where he has to go to the bathroom a whole lot. He apologizes for it repeatedly, but the other character is not complaining *G*
FAQ:
*Can I write a fic for a prompt that's already been filled? Absolutely!
*Do I have to claim a prompt in order to write it? Nope. Write whatever you like whenever you like.
*Can I post my piece elsewhere? Of course, it's yours. Do what you like with it.
*Can I post it elsewhere and just link to it here? Sure, as long as the place you're linking to isn't friends-locked.
*Can I fill my own prompt? Go right ahead.
Master List of Fills:
Supernatural, Sam/Dean (I gather from the guidelines that Wincest is okay, as long as they're of age), Sam is having nightmares about Hell, wets the bed. Sleeps with Dean for comfort, wets the bed while sharing, Dean is more than fine with it, provides sexy comfort.
FILL: The Nightmare (Supernaural, Sam/Dean) by
katekintail
Any characters, any fandom. A male character is stuck alone somewhere and really, truly, badly needs a wee. He describes in great detail everything he's feeling to someone on the phone. Maybe he's just complaining and wants the other person to know how inconvenient this is... or maybe this is just their shared kink. Either way, lots of details.
FILL: Between Doors (Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Wesley/Giles) by
justwolf
Remus/Severus, Harry Potter, R or higher. Two characters both desperately need to piss, but neither one wants to admit it out loud. So they try to push the other as far as they can in hopes that the other breaks first. This leads to trying to have sex while having extremely full and sensitive bladders. It's pretty obvious that the first one who comes will be the first one to have an accident. And so they start pushing each other sexually as well... kissing and touching and stroking in just the right places to drive the other crazy with desire.
FILL: Methods of Restraint (Harry Potter, Remus/Severus) by
scatteredscript
Harry Potter, Het or Slash, one character (male or female....) secretly like to play with desperation but didnt have the courage to go all the way yet. When they finally do someone catches them. (I'd love if it was Snape) and decide to get in on the fun (maybe set tasks for them, D/S is totally okay with me, has them push their limits in class/public)
FILL: Games Wizards Play (Harry Potter, Severus/Remus) by
katekintail
Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Angel fandom, Spike/Angel(us). Despite Angel(us) telling him lots of times to go and have a pee, Spike refuses to do so. They're going to be away from any toilets for several hours, and Spike gradually realises he really, really needs to pee. He tries not to let Angel(us) know at first, but eventually it becomes obvious. Angel(us) is cross with him, but also very tolerant, and tried to help his boy not have an accident. However, Spike eventually does wet himself. I'd like Angel(us) to be comforting, but also aroused. A D/s vibe would be great. For this fic, we can decide that vampires pee like normal humans, whether or not that makes biological sense!
FILL: Accidents (Angel the Series, Angel/Spike) by
katekintail
FILL: Fetish and Loathing on the Way to Vienna (Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angelus/Spike) by
katekintail
Harry Potter, femslash or solo including Ginny would be epic. Any rating. Ginny secretly enjoys wetting herself on purpose underneath her skirt in public settings.
FILL: Wet Feet (Harry Potter, Ginny/Hermione) by
justwolf
Rules/Details:
Post prompts as replies here for stories/fics that could feature watersports. Include any of the following: fandom, pairing, rating, situation. Post as many prompts as you like--with ONE prompt per post. If you see a prompt that inspires you, write for it and post it as a reply to the prompt. You can prompt without writing and write without prompting. You can post as many fills as you like. No pressure, just fun. Make sure anything you prompt/fill adheres to the guidelines of the community (no real person slash, no underage characters, no pimping, no photographs, etc.).
Prompt examples:
*Harry Potter, Draco/Harry, any rating. At the beginning of their relationship Draco uses magic to trick Harry into some pissplay with him. Then he realizes Harry knew about the trick all along and allowed it to happen because he shares the same kink.
*Any characters, any fandom. One character has a condition where he has to go to the bathroom a whole lot. He apologizes for it repeatedly, but the other character is not complaining *G*
FAQ:
*Can I write a fic for a prompt that's already been filled? Absolutely!
*Do I have to claim a prompt in order to write it? Nope. Write whatever you like whenever you like.
*Can I post my piece elsewhere? Of course, it's yours. Do what you like with it.
*Can I post it elsewhere and just link to it here? Sure, as long as the place you're linking to isn't friends-locked.
*Can I fill my own prompt? Go right ahead.
Master List of Fills:
Supernatural, Sam/Dean (I gather from the guidelines that Wincest is okay, as long as they're of age), Sam is having nightmares about Hell, wets the bed. Sleeps with Dean for comfort, wets the bed while sharing, Dean is more than fine with it, provides sexy comfort.
FILL: The Nightmare (Supernaural, Sam/Dean) by
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Any characters, any fandom. A male character is stuck alone somewhere and really, truly, badly needs a wee. He describes in great detail everything he's feeling to someone on the phone. Maybe he's just complaining and wants the other person to know how inconvenient this is... or maybe this is just their shared kink. Either way, lots of details.
FILL: Between Doors (Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Wesley/Giles) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Remus/Severus, Harry Potter, R or higher. Two characters both desperately need to piss, but neither one wants to admit it out loud. So they try to push the other as far as they can in hopes that the other breaks first. This leads to trying to have sex while having extremely full and sensitive bladders. It's pretty obvious that the first one who comes will be the first one to have an accident. And so they start pushing each other sexually as well... kissing and touching and stroking in just the right places to drive the other crazy with desire.
FILL: Methods of Restraint (Harry Potter, Remus/Severus) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Harry Potter, Het or Slash, one character (male or female....) secretly like to play with desperation but didnt have the courage to go all the way yet. When they finally do someone catches them. (I'd love if it was Snape) and decide to get in on the fun (maybe set tasks for them, D/S is totally okay with me, has them push their limits in class/public)
FILL: Games Wizards Play (Harry Potter, Severus/Remus) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Angel fandom, Spike/Angel(us). Despite Angel(us) telling him lots of times to go and have a pee, Spike refuses to do so. They're going to be away from any toilets for several hours, and Spike gradually realises he really, really needs to pee. He tries not to let Angel(us) know at first, but eventually it becomes obvious. Angel(us) is cross with him, but also very tolerant, and tried to help his boy not have an accident. However, Spike eventually does wet himself. I'd like Angel(us) to be comforting, but also aroused. A D/s vibe would be great. For this fic, we can decide that vampires pee like normal humans, whether or not that makes biological sense!
FILL: Accidents (Angel the Series, Angel/Spike) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
FILL: Fetish and Loathing on the Way to Vienna (Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angelus/Spike) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Harry Potter, femslash or solo including Ginny would be epic. Any rating. Ginny secretly enjoys wetting herself on purpose underneath her skirt in public settings.
FILL: Wet Feet (Harry Potter, Ginny/Hermione) by
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
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Date: 2012-09-24 09:19 pm (UTC)Wesley's hands were still sweaty. They slipped a little on the door handle, but then he got it open. He stood in the corridor for a moment, between the seats, the ground swaying under his feet. His piss trickled out of the gap between the carriages, and dripped onto the train carpet. He took a step forward. He left a footprint, but after the second step his shoe was dried by the carpet and he didn't leave a mark.
“I know,” Wesley said. “I'm going back to my seat now. I can't believe that happened.”
“I can,” Giles said. “You could be more careful.”
“Have you come yet?” Wesley said, sitting down.
“Yes, just a moment ago. I was imagining you shuffling back to your seat, all red-faced and ashamed. And feeling much happier, too.”
“I do feel much happier,” Wesley said. “God, but I needed to go.”
“I know,” Giles said. There was a pause as Wesley settled himself. He imagined Giles cleaning himself up in their living room, tucking himself back into his clothes. Then Giles said, “I miss you.”
“Me too. I'll be home soon.”
“Yes. Drink lots on the plane, and we'll have an interesting drive home.”
Wesley laughed. “Yes, all right.”
“Good. I hope your meeting goes well,” Giles said.
“Probably be very tedious.” Wesley said.
“Probably will,” Giles said. “I'll ring you tonight.”
“Okay,” Wesley said, and hung up. He put the phone back in his pocket, and glanced back down the carriage. The footprints by the door were already drying. Perhaps no one would ever guess what had happened.
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Date: 2012-09-25 06:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-09-27 03:58 pm (UTC)“I thought they would,” Wesley said, worrying his lip between his teeth once more. “I really thought they would.
I love that repetition. Somehow, these lines sounded perfectly in Wes' voice in my head.
“Oh,” Giles said, and Wesley was relieved to hear the complete understanding contained in that single syllable
This is so great. So much in that one syllable. Beautiful writing.
“Oh dear,” Giles said. Wesley heard the dull thump of a book being closed, and he pictured Giles settling back on the couch, giving Wesley his complete attention
That thump OMG that thump! I loved it. I'm a huge reader and I love bookish!Giles. That little detail is so perfect!
“It was nice, actually, wasn't it?” Giles said, his voice low and soothing. “You were all warm and wet and desperate, and I pulled you onto my lap, and you made me wet too, and God, you felt good.”
What an amazing memory for them to call up. I love Giles' "you made me wet too." That just about killed me. It's like a WS fic inside of a WS fic. I love those *G*
“I don't know. Enough. I've really got to go. I can't stop needing to go. If you could see me, you'd know. My cheeks are all red, and I feel like it's about to start leaking out of me.”
Double GAH! I absolutely adore the "I can't stop needing to go" line. Like when it's not so bad and can kind of be ignored, but Wes is too far along. Poor boy *pets* And the leaking bit... I can just imagine him whispering that into a phone, trying to get Giles to understand how bad it is.
“You know things are better when you do what I say,” Giles said.
“Yes,” Wesley said, “I do know that. I'm almost there.”
And a little later:
“Do what I say, Wesley.” Giles was firm. Wesley liked that, he was used to obeying that tone.
A great dynamic of their relationship, younger watcher obeying the older, more experienced one in the relationship. I love Giles describing Wes as desperate to go and desperate for people not to know it. That's SO Wes. It's lovely to see Giles using his power from afar to make Wes more comfortable and save the man's trousers. I can just imagine how humiliated Wes would be if he stepped off the train for his meeting with a wet crotch, squishy shoes, and trails down his leg.
“Yes, God yes. I don't think I can hold it any longer. I'm going to wee in my trousers. Oh, Christ, Giles, I'm going to wee right here...”
I just adore when Brits use that word. Another reason I'm glad you went with this pairing in the end. Squee!
“It just keeps coming and coming,” he said. The train jolted, and he had to tighten his leg muscles.
Love both of these sentences so very much. Loved the reminder of exactly where he was in the midst of the description of what he was doing. The only thing I didn't get out of your piece was actually how loud it is between cars. You can hear the sounds of the rails and the cars jostling and the world rushing by. At least, you can in all the trains I've been in. Maybe those accordion things on each side buffer better over there, enough so that Wes would be able to hear Giles on the phone and wouldn't have to yell into the phone--how awkward would that be? LOL
“Yes. Drink lots on the plane, and we'll have an interesting drive home.”
Wesley laughed. “Yes, all right.”
“Good. I hope your meeting goes well,” Giles said.
“Probably be very tedious.” Wesley said.
“Probably will,” Giles said. “I'll ring you tonight.”
Oh wow. Yeah, well, compared to THAT, I'm sure ANY meeting would be tedious! LOL A great visual to end with, and I'm glad that after this horrible (read: wonderful) experience, Wes is still up for a little playing. He knows his Giles so well, and vice-versa!
Lovely fic! Thanks for writing it!
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Date: 2012-09-27 08:49 pm (UTC)There are some trains in which the space between carraiges is reasonably quiet, but I think in the kind I'm imagining it would have been VERY loud, so you're right, Wesley and Giles would definitely have had to shout at each other, which would have made it 100 times more embarrassing! Poor boys.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed writing Wes and Giles--I haven't in ages, and I think they go really well together. I'll have to write more piss play with them some time. I feel like Giles would tend to be more in charge, because he's older and seems more experienced than Wesley, and I think Wes would be very happy to go along with Giles's ideas. I'm glad Giles was able to save Wesley from the himiliation of getting off the train in wet trousers too!
Thanks again! :)